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Post by happilymarred on Jan 29, 2009 20:38:08 GMT -5
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Post by BandGeek727 on Feb 5, 2009 18:06:39 GMT -5
You've got a great story here! I'm enjoying it so much! ^^
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Post by happilymarred on Feb 6, 2009 20:51:57 GMT -5
Aw, thanks so much! ;D
I got your message and I will be sure to fix my grammar mistakes! I think I was just so excited and quick to write that chapter, and in my haste I made some mistakes. Thanks for pointing them out to me!
Sorry I haven't updated in a while. School has been absolutely CRAZY this week... Hopefully the next chapter will be up by tomorrow.
Thank you for the reviews!
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Post by BandGeek727 on Feb 6, 2009 21:43:51 GMT -5
Oh, it's okay! That kind of mistake is really easy to miss. Glad I could help! Aw, don't worry about the updates. School can be crazy, it's okay. ^^ And you're welcome!  |
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Post by happilymarred on Feb 19, 2009 16:19:19 GMT -5
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Post by NinjaRabbit on Feb 19, 2009 20:19:09 GMT -5
Awww, poor XR. He doesn' t get a say in anything, does he?
And Buzz being anxious for a mission totally sounds like him.
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Post by happilymarred on Feb 25, 2009 20:45:59 GMT -5
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Post by BandGeek727 on Feb 26, 2009 13:24:06 GMT -5
…DANG FF.NET
For some reason my full review wasn’t posted. >( And it won't let me post another one.
Let’s try this again.
I was so excited to see you updated. This scene is so, so sweet. I like how you described the kiss; I could totally picture it.
I like how you described XR’s sense of feeling; it’s different, but that’s what I like about it- you’re putting your own take to it and it’s great to see that. And I thought Mira’s internal dialogue was really quite touching.
The tension’s building! I can’t wait to see what happens next!
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Post by happilymarred on Mar 1, 2009 17:20:05 GMT -5
^Haha. I was like... um I wonder what "yush" is? LOL But thank you for the review! I really appreciate everything you say! Your reviews are always the sweetest! And I hoped it wasn't too cheesy. I never realized how hard it was to write for this couple until I actually started writing for them myself! Newest Chapter Up! www.fanfiction.net/s/4827278/7/Changes |
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Post by BandGeek727 on Mar 8, 2009 22:01:02 GMT -5
Oh yeah, they're definitely a tricky couple to capture. But that's half the fun to me. XD
Aw, you're so welcome! ^^
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Post by happilymarred on Mar 18, 2009 22:05:56 GMT -5
www.fanfiction.net/s/4827278/8/ChangesIt's finally over! I don't know whether to be relieved or sad! Thank you all so very much for reading and reviewing! Sorry I haven't updated until now! I just got done with my school play!
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Post by BandGeek727 on Mar 21, 2009 16:22:55 GMT -5
DANG STUPID FF.NET Once again my full review wasn't posted.  This is what I was going to say: …I am torn between several emotions. First of all, I’m so excited that you updated! Secondly, I’m kinda sad that it’s over. But mostly I’m so very glad that you’ve written this. ^^ Aw, what a cute way to end the story. I absolutely loved the dialogue between XR and Mira, it was SO SWEET. <3 And Booster was absolutely adorable. I don’t want to sound nitpicky, I really enjoyed this chapter, but I so would’ve loved to see more interaction between XR and Mira, how they deal with him being a robot again. Or maybe it’s just that I don’t want to see this story end. X3 It’s not even that it felt rushed, it’s just; it feels like there’s so much more this story could explore. This is not to say that I didn’t like it – this chapter was so cute and a great ending. I’ve truly, truly enjoyed reading this story, it’s been great fun. And I sincerely hope this isn’t the last of BLoSC we’ve seen from you! And wow, thank you so much for your kind words; you’re so sweet! <3 I’m glad I could help you, really, you are so very welcome! ^^ |
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Post by tonetone1224 on May 26, 2009 6:37:18 GMT -5
Oh, I loved that one when I read it.
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poor XR. I feel so bad for him. lol and I wrote it too...
